Water – A Haiku

Binding  roots to sand ,felt ,

On wavy wind rippled silky dusty rocks,

Your presence even in absence

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5 responses to “Water – A Haiku

  1. Nice one. But the syllables form isn’t 5-7-5? Or is it another form of Haiku? Sorry for my questions.

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  2. I read it once and I was compelled to read again but this time out loud. The way you structured your adjectives and your commas, made me pause. I really like this Haiku.

    Sincerely,
    Fellow Writing Poetry classmate :D.

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