Binding roots to sand ,felt ,
On wavy wind rippled silky dusty rocks,
Your presence even in absence
Nice one. But the syllables form isn’t 5-7-5? Or is it another form of Haiku? Sorry for my questions.
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Hi, I used the 5-7-5 method for words instead of syllables. It’s a modern interpretation of the traditional Haiku.:)
Oh I see. Thanks for the explanation 🙂
I read it once and I was compelled to read again but this time out loud. The way you structured your adjectives and your commas, made me pause. I really like this Haiku.
Fellow Writing Poetry classmate :D.
Thanks so much for the feedback . Look forward to reading your version.
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Roots and Water