Water – A Haiku

Posted on February 16, 2015 | 5 Comments

Binding  roots to sand ,felt ,

On wavy wind rippled silky dusty rocks,

Your presence even in absence

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5 responses to “Water – A Haiku”

  1. ichasyahfa | February 16, 2015 at 1:57 am | Reply

    Nice one. But the syllables form isn’t 5-7-5? Or is it another form of Haiku? Sorry for my questions.

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  2. Noirfifre | February 16, 2015 at 2:01 am | Reply

    I read it once and I was compelled to read again but this time out loud. The way you structured your adjectives and your commas, made me pause. I really like this Haiku.

    Sincerely,
    Fellow Writing Poetry classmate :D.

    Like

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