Borekowski’s patronizing voice always pissed Carla off .
She deliberately delayed his reports sending it through inter-office mail ignoring requests that she come in person to hand it in. She had never met Borekowski face-to-face and she was going to keep it that way.
“If I lay ever eyes on Borekowski I’m going to drag that old geezer to the 55th floor and arrange a date for him with gravity”, she fumed.
One day she laid eyes on Borekowski working out in the office gym in his ‘UnderArmour’. She dragged him to the 55th floor of the Marriott next door.
— end —
This exactly 99 word story was written for the 100 word photo challenge. More details about this challenge can be found at: https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/03/30/1-april-2016/
PHOTO PROMPT © Marie Gail Stratford
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Oooo don’t judge a book or person by assumptions! Great story
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Thank you Laurie.
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Hehe – hope she had a good time!
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She must have 🙂
Thanks for reading.
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Go girl! 🙂
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ha ha. Thanks for reading Sandra.
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Interesting thoughts.
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Interesting characters too. Thanks for reading.
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That was a quick turn-about! I’m guessing he won’t be a long-term thing, though 🙂
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Carla is too quick to form strong opinions and reform them as it suits her. Your guess may be right.
Thanks for reading Ali.
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This has me giggling…
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Giggle away 🙂 Thanks for reading.
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Dear Ansumani,
I hope it was a satisfying experience and worth the prison time. 😉 Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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I hear such things tend to be satisfying given their illicit nature 🙂
Thanks for reading Rochelle.
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Hilarious! Fantastic twist ending.
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Thank you Jan.
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Smile,
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🙂 Thanks for reading Mike.
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So very clever. One of those pieces that I wish I’d have written… !
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Thank you for that nice compliment Carol 🙂
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Guess he was okay with being dragged across… 😉
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He must have really wanted those reports on time 🙂
Thanks for reading Dale.
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Abrupt end, like falling off a cliff. 🙂
Lily
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Maybe…maybe not.
Thanks for reading.
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a real go-getter. she’ll get far.
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She will I’m sure.
Thanks for reading.
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Great story. Funny!
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Thank you!
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Hehehe, that was fun. How quickly she changes her mind. I hope he isn’t patronizing when they ‘have fun’ else that affair will be very short-lived.
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Thanks Gah! I’m guessing there won’t be much talking 🙂
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Haha! What eye cannot see might be deceiving? 🙂 Great take! And I so love ‘date with gravity’. Such a creative line!
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Thank you Rose.
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my pleasure 🙂
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He must have great abs. Nice storyline!
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He must have… Thanks Madame!
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I take it she didn’t throw him off. Well written, Ansumani. 🙂 — Suzanne
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She hasn’t thrown him off yet 🙂 Thanks Suzanne.
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THIS is what reading flash fiction is all about. To the point and in 99 words too! Totally love this 🙂 #FridayFictioneers
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