I lit a fire in the hearth,
To replace your warmth.
I lit the world up with lamps,
To make up for your absence.
It works.
Most of the time.
But neither lamps nor fire.
play with my shadows like you do, Sire.
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Note: “shadows” here represents the metaphysical one we are all supposed to carry according to Jungian psychology:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shadow_%28psychology%29
—- end note —
This 42 word ” story” is written in response to the 100 word photo challenge posted by Rochelle Wisoff-Field each week. This week’s photo was provided by Rochelle herself.
Click on the ‘blue frog’ below to read other amazing takes on the same photo prompt:
Dear Ansumi,
Unique little piece. Compact and to the point.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. Usually i end up spending a lot of time editing a piece down to 100 words so i decided to keep it small this week.
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beautiful. no explanation required. don’t incriminate yourself. 🙂
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Thanks. The explanation was specifically for a couple of readers from the family, who are not that proficient with the subtleties of the English language. I know our usual cast of the FF readers/writers need no explanations 🙂
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We all have a few shadows. Good piece
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Some shadows we are not aware of until someone comes in our life and shows it to us 🙂 Thanks Tracey.
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Beautiful piece.
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Thanks Alicia.
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Very nice
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Thank you!
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Lovely. Good work. Shadows are everywhere
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Thanks!
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Less is more, and this is certainly a lot. Well done!
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Thanks Sandra. You artfully tell a lot in your crisp stories too 🙂
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Killer last line. Poetic!
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Thanks!
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I fear demonic influence.
Good piece.
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Thanks Mick. Some shadows are benign too 🙂
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Beautiful and brief. I am dying with curiosity about who that “Sire” is — but you don’t have to enlighten me, if you don’t want to. He can remain in the shadows!
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Thanks Dreamer! The “Sire” missing in the most literal sense from the picture is none other than the Sun. In the metaphorical sense it can be anyone who brings out the “shadows: in you , positive or negative, that you even haven’t been aware of. Or someone who knows you more than you do.
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Wonderful!
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Lovely little piece. It made me look more carefully at the picture.
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Thanks Patrick!
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Intriguing piece.
And the explanation of ‘shadows’ is unnecessary, I think.
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Thanks
The explanation was specifically for some family readers, who are not that proficient with the subtleties of the English language. I know our usual cast of the FF readers/writers need no explanations 🙂
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Short and sweet (and I agree with CE… no need for any explanations!)
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Thanks Dale. My son read this and “didn’t get it” . I asked him to read it again and with the explanation he “got it”. The explanation are for readers like him : literary babies 🙂
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😉
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I agree with other commenters that explanation of the story line is not necessary; the piece is perfect and complete as is. If I had to categorize it, I would say it’s a prose poem–and a lovely one, too!
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Thanks Jan. I was conflicted on the category and put word story in quotes because I was undecided. The explanation was for some readers, like my son, who I know needed that.
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Quite sad and haunting. Nice!
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Thanks Ali !
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Beautiful … concise, but powerful.
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Thank you!
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Delightful. It’s a feeling many of us have experienced.
Rosey Pinkerton’s blog
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Thanks Rosey. I’m sure we have all been there 🙂
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Metaphorically, literally…this works lots of ways.
Short is sweet.
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This is packed with impact that works in so many ways.. Very good.
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This piece has a medieval tone with the word “sire” in it. Thanks for the link to explain “shadow.” I was unfamiliar with that meaning. Good metaphors. Well done, Ansumani. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Fascinating little piece. I love how you used the prompt, and the linked reading was very interesting.
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