A speck…

PHOTO PROMPT - © Adam Ickes

“Write to me everyday”, he said.

I nodded-  Words stuck like a broken down car on a lonely highway.

I stood near the ‘Ticketed passengers only’ sign watching him walk the long corridor  to his flight until he was a speck…in my eye.

I went back to our empty apartment. Each day  a penance until his return.

19 years later:

“Text me everyday”, he says.

I nod.

I watch him  walking the long corridor to his flight until he’s a speck…and break into a jig.

Each day is going to be a party!

—end —-

This 100 word story may or may not be a true ,depending on who’s asking 🙂

More details about this 100 word challenge at:

https://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2016/08/10/12-august-2016/

For more stories with the same picture prompt click on the froggy below.

PHOTO PROMPT – © Adam Ickes

 

 

 

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25 responses to “A speck…

  1. Dear Ansumani,

    A lot can change in 19 years. Well structured, well told story that made me laugh at the end.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. Though love turns frogs into princes, marriage turns them slowly back again huh? (in Marge Piercey’s words)

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  3. Ha, this made me chuckle. A tale of marriages that is universal?!

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  4. I think we can safely assume she’s over him now. Wryly done.

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  5. I thought it was funny too. I knew a man who was a salesman for 43 years. He would leave Sunday evening and return home on Thursday afternoon. I always wondered how his wife adjusted to him being underfoot when he retired.

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  6. Ha! It’s nice to get a bit of “me time” after 19 years! I like your illustration of how things can change in a long-term relationship.

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  7. LOL. I love the repitition, and the punch line. After 19 years, a bit of a time out will do her good.

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  8. i wonder what happens when he retires? 🙂

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  9. For some couples, the magic lasts their whole married lives. For others not so much. That’s life. 😐 Good writing, Ansumani. 🙂 — Suzanne

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  10. Good story but your disclaimer is priceless. I wish I’d used it myself a few times.

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